Comment by Reuben Woolley on 30 May, 2018 at 11:36 am
Very effective, well said, especially in the hidden relentlessness of the dark creeping beneath the landscape, heading for its source. What rough beast goes a’tunneling,/tunneling/maggots of rot disperse/in burrows of/dark tomorrows. – With thanks to Reuben Woolley.
Comment by Red Slider on 30 May, 2018 at 9:29 pm
already with the edits (oh dear, to spontaneous replies that turn on their authors) “…in burrows’/dark tomorrows”. Let’s see how that works (if the format holds indents):
What rough beast goes a’tunnelling,
tunneling
maggots of rot disperse
in burrows’
dark tomorrows.
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Comment by Reuben Woolley on 30 May, 2018 at 11:36 amVery effective, well said, especially in the hidden relentlessness of the dark creeping beneath the landscape, heading for its source. What rough beast goes a’tunneling,/tunneling/maggots of rot disperse/in burrows of/dark tomorrows. – With thanks to Reuben Woolley.
Comment by Red Slider on 30 May, 2018 at 9:29 pmalready with the edits (oh dear, to spontaneous replies that turn on their authors) “…in burrows’/dark tomorrows”. Let’s see how that works (if the format holds indents):
What rough beast goes a’tunnelling,
tunneling
Comment by Red Slider on 30 May, 2018 at 9:36 pmmaggots of rot disperse
in burrows’
dark tomorrows.
nope, it doesn’t. imagine it then. 🙁
Comment by Red Slider on 30 May, 2018 at 9:37 pmoutstanding beginning – excellent write!!
Comment by phibby on 30 May, 2018 at 11:32 pmThanks, Phibby.
Comment by Reuben Woolley on 3 June, 2018 at 6:50 pmExcellent poem!
Comment by Colin Christopher Cairns on 16 June, 2018 at 6:01 pm