where things like dragons hid in douma

7 Responses to where things like dragons hid in douma

1. My thanks to Rupert M Loydell

   Comment by Reuben Woolley on 30 May, 2018 at 11:36 am

2. Very effective, well said, especially in the hidden relentlessness of the dark creeping beneath the landscape, heading for its source. What rough beast goes a’tunneling,/tunneling/maggots of rot disperse/in burrows of/dark tomorrows. – With thanks to Reuben Woolley.

   Comment by Red Slider on 30 May, 2018 at 9:29 pm

3. already with the edits (oh dear, to spontaneous replies that turn on their authors) “…in burrows’/dark tomorrows”. Let’s see how that works (if the format holds indents):

   What rough beast goes a’tunnelling,

   tunneling
   maggots of rot disperse
   in burrows’
   dark tomorrows.

   Comment by Red Slider on 30 May, 2018 at 9:36 pm

4. nope, it doesn’t. imagine it then. 🙁

   Comment by Red Slider on 30 May, 2018 at 9:37 pm

5. outstanding beginning – excellent write!!

   Comment by phibby on 30 May, 2018 at 11:32 pm

6. Thanks, Phibby.

   Comment by Reuben Woolley on 3 June, 2018 at 6:50 pm

7. Excellent poem!

   Comment by Colin Christopher Cairns on 16 June, 2018 at 6:01 pm

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